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Bryce Tolpen’s essay is a real achievement. By pairing Genesis’ *tohu wabohu* with Keith Johnstone’s improv lessons, he rescues creation from the tired ex nihilo debate and shows how God works with chaos rather than erasing it. “Derivative justice” is not second-rate but exactly how God repurposes empire’s fragments—mocking Pharaoh’s gods, improvising covenants, turning Roman coercion into a second mile walked in freedom.

The sources come fast—Cassuto, Johnstone, Scott, Wells—but the best moments slow down: Gerrel Jones on a Birmingham porch, Sarah and Abraham laughing, the Syrophoenician woman extending Jesus’ metaphor. These stories embody the overacceptance the essay commends.

I read with special appreciation the citation of Herbert May (a close family friend and a hugely significant influence on “seminary” education), whose work on Egypt and chaos still resonates. I also noticed the absence of David Bentley Hart, who has pressed hard against ex nihilo readings. Tolpen’s improvisational hermeneutic stands in fruitful tension with Hart’s metaphysical case.

If there’s a flaw, it’s the risk of overcrowding the stage. But the deeper accomplishment is clear: the essay holds tragedy and comedy together, insisting that political witness requires both lament and laughter.

Chaos may set the scene, but improv belongs to God.

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